Help with PCTales character

[John Jr.]

Hi guys, I need help.
I'm finishing a two parter for PCtales, but I can't make the skins for two new characters. I tried my best in the last days, but results ranged of "Awful" to "Just plain no!". May some real artist give me a hand here?
First, our heroine:
Mighty Girl is Mary Marvel/Supergirl derivative. She's pretty, innocent and, well, Poliana-like.
http://img708.imageshack.us/i/22502308.jpg/
Thanks in advance!

[BentonGrey]

Very nice design, JJ!  I like it.  You've got something there that fits in really well with FF.

[AfghanAnt]

Hi guys, I need help.
I'm finishing a two parter for PCtales, but I can't make the skins for two new characters. I tried my best in the last days, but results ranged of "Awful" to "Just plain no!". May some real artist give me a hand here?
First, our heroine:
Mighty Girl is Mary Marvel/Supergirl derivative. She's pretty, innocent and, well, Poliana-like.
http://img708.imageshack.us/i/22502308.jpg/
Thanks in advance!

Once I'm done with something else I could help you with this. When do you need it?

[John Jr.]

Thanks a lot, AA!
We're using her in the next PCtales update, so I'll pass the question to my Editor in Chief, Perr..., I mean, Benton Grey.
Benton?

[BentonGrey]

Hrmm...well, we're pretty close to done, so this will be more or less the only thing we really need to release Episode 3, so sooner would be better for that.  However, it isn't like we've got a hard deadline or anything.  I'd love to see your take on this, AA.

JJ, are you going to request the other guy?

[John Jr.]

Hrmm...well, we're pretty close to done, so this will be more or less the only thing we really need to release Episode 3, so sooner would be better for that.  However, it isn't like we've got a hard deadline or anything.  I'd love to see your take on this, AA.

JJ, are you going to request the other guy?

I was so shocked with how ugly my drawing ended I get to find other way to show Titan:


Titan is Mighty Gir'ls "opposite number", if she's a Mary Marvel derivative he's "Superboy gone bad". He's slightly older than MG (she's abot 16, he's about 18 or 19) and he looks and acts very cool and emotionless.

A better looking Mighty Girl:



Edit: I can use Male Cape Nobelt as Titan's mesh and Interceptor's Female teen cape as MG's, so we only need the skins.

[area34]

If AA's to busy(I would rather see his take too) I can do the guy for you. Would you want skope for him? It wouldn't be to hard to take Ren's Superman and add the belt and cape.

[John Jr.]

It would be great, Area!
Thanks a lot!

[area34]

I finished Pyro and did the changes to Rusty so I'm already starting a skope/skin for Titan but if AA wants to do it feel free to use his though.

[area34]

All done? If there is anything you want changed let me know. I think I might take a shot at the girl now...

[John Jr.]

WOW!!
It's very impressive, Area.
The costume is great, the hair perfect and the face has just the smug, emotionless feel I imagined for Titan.
Thanks a lot, it's a privilege have one character I created made by someone as talented as you.
I'm looking forward to see your take on Mighty Girl!

[area34]

I went ahead and skoped her from Supergirl. I'm not nearly as good at women as I am at men. If she works for you I'll go ahead and do the readme's and pack em up for you.

[John Jr.]

I went ahead and skoped her from Supergirl. I'm not nearly as good at women as I am at men. If she works for you I'll go ahead and do the readme's and pack em up for you.

Are you kidding, Area? She's beautiful!
Thanks a lot!