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New GenX - Sunshine

Started by miguelyanke, February 07, 2008, 05:03:37 AM

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miguelyanke

Hi people!

My name is miguel_yanke, I've been reading this forum since Ink did his first mesh (I did some fixs in my yahoo's group), but i've never been an artist before, so any of my skins have never been released.

So we can consider this as my "first skin".

This is just a project that I want to share with Juancho, 'cause he did the costume from the original image.



I thought it was done for Dazzler_Ink mesh, but when I tried, I saw the jacket was wrong, so I did it in a hexx x-treme_rouge:

She is Noriko Yoshida, aka Sunshine!



The character is the daughter od Sunfire and Dazzler in a alternate world.
After a fighting night with Longshot in a Tai Wan concert, Dazzler hook up with his friend Shiro. They were drunks and, in the morning, both were naked in a bed, sleeping together.
Fastly, he run to talk with her husband, and together they accepted the consecuences, accepted the baby that were going to have.
She wears the costume of his father and aunt, with some modifications.

The mesh is unfinished, and i'm sure that i'm gonna start it again, cause the t-shirt is added to the body (cause i forget to save the .psd  :P), also, i'd like to add some parts of other meshes (as the Knee pads) but i'm learning to use the nifskope...

¿What other mesh can i use to improve the character?

-Juancho, ¡SORPRESA! Te dije que no lo iba a publicar hasta que lo vieses... pero weno, quería darte una sorpreshill :lol: :lol:, espero que te guste, aunque hay q admitir que no está ni la mitad d bien q los tuyos TT_TT... pero no importa, tiempo al tiempo... espero que lo que he escrito arriba se haya entendio... sino me va a dar algo ^_^; bueno bomboncito voy a ver si termino la edición (no me sale eso del nifskope TT_TT) dame ánimos y ya te pasare el .psd pa que me lo mejores !!!!  :wub:Je t'adore :wub:)


Ump: Sorry for my english,  i'm from Spain and my grammar is so bad! :cool:
PD: sorry for my spanish i'm from the south of Spain and my grammar is also so bad! ^ :rolleyes: :D :D :P

billdamn22

I can't think of anything that will help to improve on this skin. It truly is an amazing first.

murs47

That's a really good first! :thumbup:

And another great design, by juancho. Hmmmm, maybe he should get a job at Marvel as the designated costume designer.

C4

I have to agree first that that is a great design & second that this is a great first skin. If that is your start I am excited to see your coming skins.  :thumbup:

Suggestions I have to improving it. (I am no skinner BTW)

Is to work on the transition between boots and pants and the transition between pants and skin. That needs some shadows / fading or well a skinner can explain it better. And I would add reflection effects to the wrist bands.

miguelyanke

 :o :o :o :o
Thx u all!!!! It's so amazin that people like my work (when i don't like it ^_^)

Yes, i've to improve the darkness in the pants and in the skin, and i want to chage the face (I would like Juancho help me with it)

Also, i have to change darkness in the jacket, and change the so saturate red.

at least, i have in mind, change the wrist bands and create an skope from the rouge_Jimlee mesh.

I'm looking for something for her Knee pads but i didn't have found (I DUNNO WHAT TENSE OF THE VERB I SHOULD USE!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:) anything, I thought something like Gambit mesh, if you propose me something i'd be so grateful.


THX U ALL!! AGAIN!!!

JUANCHO HE TENIO UN WEN PROFE!!! ^_^ (TU) ^_^ BESOS REY!

miguelyanke

OK! HERE IS SHE!!


At last I used Mystic_INK hair 'cause i didn't like the other one ^_^

What do you think now?

(i'm trying to improve the darkness in the skin near the pant)

AfghanAnt

I really love the way the skin turned out. Good job on your first skin!

blobula

I agree with the other, this is a great first skin. I love the face work..

Congratulations and I hope to see more from you.

miguelyanke

I used jubilee_INK standard skin face (for Afghan Ant) with ome modification, but i want change it (when Juancho help me). I also used C6 femalebasic skin changing the color like jubilation face.

Thanx ..u all, but this is not her end. The first time i imagine her, i saw 2 big bangs, and, now, with blink_Ink mesh i did it!.

There's a problem, when i use the right bang, everithing is ok, but, when i add the left one, the mesh crashes and i have to elimine this one...

I dunno why it happens, so, my solution has benn add 2 right bang and move it to the left...

I now it's so simple, but, at least, it looks like the original.

Now, i'm rotating it both to looks good, but i should learn how to stretch'em cause the bangs are so little and i need bigger ones



[this idea didn't like Juancho, and he did me the other one... i'm sure that, if i upload the hex/skin i will do both)