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the script is at the top but yeah..we change  scene like 3 times. ONCE from the house to Huntress's apartment and then siggerllo's house. Grr maybe i am over in my head. What do you guys think?

[Alaric]

Grr maybe i am over in my head. What do you guys think?

Heh... Don't even think about chickening out...

These are really good! Great storytelling, easy to follow, dynamic, exciting...

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[Mowgli]

Ink, I know I haven't been on for a while, so please forgive the late reply. Your work has come light years since you started posting. The figure work in these is really great. I love the dynamic movement, but most of all I like your shapes. The shapes and linework you use to create figures is very seductive and easy to like.

Just clean it up a bit so an inker doesn't have to guess in those greyer areas and you are on your way sir. Excellent work!  :thumbup:

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thanks mowgli, that means allot coming from you. These are all very very very rough so i am going to do my own "ink" with pencils soon. As soon as i redo some of the panels and i'll post it.

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talked to dustin nguyen,, and he gave me GREAT insight to how to redo this page. So yeah i think it looks loads better



amd redoing the last panel to look like this.

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getting there!  how does that last panel look guys? Better?

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[juancho]

u knpw ink buddy ive been here long enough to remeber your skins, the xtreme x men, the mach 5,etc... and some of the coolest meshes ever to be created, so i feel really great to see that u have evolved once more to become anawsome artist.
as u know already my artistic knowledge is almost non existant, but i can say i love what u have been doing, its really inspiring
thanks for sharing it with us

[MikeB7]

getting there!  how does that last panel look guys? Better?

Definately.  Flipping the image made the page flow much better.




Your Huntress is just totally filled with hotness and makes me hope she doesn't catch me staring at her but even if she did, I couldn't look away so I would turn red from shyness.

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work's making it hard to draw but i've got to keep trying so i did a little warm up sketching tonight.

took a break and drew this instead

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[Reepicheep]

I havn't taken the time to respond to your work recently. I really should have.

Its incredible stuff, Ink. I'm still amazed.

[Nymph]

OK! BATGIRL RULES! :thumbup:

I like The Engineer I believe? (sorry never read that comic...Authority right?)
She is simple but her pose is so...."powerful but elegant woman" like
something you would see Jean Grey in or Storm.....maybe Hawkgirl.

The Sequence with Huntress is awesome! :)

Looking fantastic remember to post the finished work so we can praise it! :)

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frog and bee? Maybe raccoon next? Idk tell me what to draw! battleru lol

[Blkcasanova247]

Sweet!  :lol: Those designs are so cool!

[Uncle Yuan]

frog and bee? Maybe raccoon next? Idk tell me what to draw! battleru lol

Panda!

btw - cool stuff, per usual!

[Nymph]

If you are doing forest? the main thing you need to do is Deer then Bear(Bear could be this grotesquely huge guy and Deer like a little girl)


Edit: could you add antennae on to the bee because it looks like a character from Little Nickie....if you know what i mean. why douesnt she have a stinger?

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Thanks for all the comment guys , very motivating.



Funny thing is i drew Kid raccoon before work and Lady Jellyfish after work. I think kid raccoon is weaker personally but i'd love to hear your guys thoughts.

SO i will probally make some cosmectic changes to the characters when i finish the line up in two or three more characters.

[Nymph]

to be honest when i fist saw her she looked like Squid Lady....the hat doesnt really represent jellyfish....I like Kid Racoon....what are their abilities this time? For him I see stealth and for her maybe lightning shocks....but then again Im not the artist.

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umm yeah your correct


Bee's powers are phermones flight and idk hard shell?
Frogs are sticky good posionous goo

Kid Raccoon has a batman like mentor which idk if i want to draw...lol
stealth , wall climbing and agility

and Lady jelly?

Shocks? Paralaysis and magic wand? who knows..lol

[Tortuga]

Are these original characters or are they based on a series...some DC stuff?

The poses and clarity of the lines are great.  Great jeeorb!

[Nymph]

make it Bear or Deer = Batman  and Racoon = Robin


Lady Jelly is like totally cool but the hat is kinda off......i still think you should do a little girl like an 8 year old girl....maybe a sparrow?

I also like the Idea of an Owl (oldman)


but I cant draw so its up to you lol

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tort- all coming out of my crazy head on my spare time. So orginal characters from me
thanks!

Nymph....
I was thinkin owl for batman BUT there is an owlman
and owl as old man is cool but yeah...i want to try and break some sterotypes

Ok she is only half jelly , half squid and half sea horse...lol wait thats too much



in the same vain as the other designs. Except she isn't a "animorph". I was thinking what if there morphs and what if there people wanted to be as cool as the morphs but are just human. Like bats ^_^"""""

This robot isn't souless, comes with a complimentary panda soul btw :)

[Uncle Yuan]

OK - now that Panda rocks!

Which reminds me, haven't seen Psychopanda around for quite a while . . .

[Nymph]

ok so hwat is the girls theme??? i mean like she doesnt have any noticable gifts? maybe the tech girl that stays at the secret base??

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can't let zulu have all the fun ^_^


wish i could post more... i got a job a animation studio and it has been KILLING ME... ~_~"

[Nymph]

lemme guess.......umm....a lizard and owl???

[Reepicheep]

Not sure I wanna know what that chap is going with a bandaid there. Sounds like a bit of a severe accident.

These designs are all pretty wicked. Got names for those last two?

I'd like to see them in an action shot. That would be pretty cool.  :thumbup: