more characters

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new charcter based on my old character? Any improvments ...any disimprovment. Should i just quit now.lol

OHHH any good names?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/14787371/?qo=91&q=by%3Aink4884&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

[MJB]

Love the sketch. You just get better and better. I really like how this one seems more finished. Before you have shown us sketches that look very messy but cool. This one is nice and clean. Me likey! :mjbdeadagain

Oh as far as name suggestions, sticking with the theme you have going...

Ace. Airman. Aerialist. Aeronaut.

-MJB

[gdaybloke]

The dude's wearing three belts, tube socks, and has a bandana or something covering an eye under psuedo-flying helmet - I'm thinking he's not quite all there.

With the buckles on one side, the eye-cover on the other, he's also asymetrical...

Asymetry!

[Kitt Basher]

Looks pretty sweet ... with the unorganized look to him, I thought Anarchy

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there are allot of great names... thanks to you guys on d.a

Anarchy
asymetrical
Ace. Airman. Aerialist. Aeronaut.
-ace
A-Head!
anchor
Ajax
Anarch!
Aviator

heh makes me scared to do the next design because this one had a good response.

[Reepicheep]

Give him a name starting with B. Nobody will ever see it coming!

And I love it, Ink!

[UnkoMan]

I actually love the name Aeronaut.

He looks like he should be in some RPG of some kind. I think it's the sheer amount of belts that does that.

[Reepicheep]

I think it's the sheer amount of belts that does that.

If you look carefully, theres one coming out of his ear.

[juancho]

really nice inkie, tohugh i am not surprised, your work is always stuning, i really like this dude, he has a fresh cool look
Aerial, i like aerial for a name

[Lord Elcorion]

I think it's the sheer amount of belts that does that.

If you look carefully, theres one coming out of his ear.

actually i think that's his helmet chin strap

[MikeB7]

Man, Ink - I never know what to say because I'm a complete and utter drooling fanboy over your work.  I'm serious, absolutely love everything you do.  I have no constructive or critique-ing comments to add.  I just love you.  Keep drawing, this is what you deserve to be doing.

[Tortuga]

Agreed, it's quite awesome.

[Glitch Girl]

Very clean and great design Ink.  "Anarchy", "Aeronaut" or maybe "Airhead" come to mind as possible names for him.   Are you planning to color?

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thanks guys, i usually try to do designs in threes at least before i colors so i can get a good color scheme but the other two aren't as dynamic of a character as this one.

Thanks for all the support though.

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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48108873/

didn't create the character...it's for a jam i did on D.a
I dont know why i always have more fun redrawing other people's characters but when i need to do work for me i just end up freezing up. Ohh well , a warm up is still good for me.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10082735/?qo=14&q=by%3Arikun&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps

The challenge for me was making this character's colors work in and compliment each other. hard!

[MJB]

A pretty pin-up image. Nothing to write home to mommy about but the girl is nice looking. I love the Steranko type back ground.

-MJB

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a 30 dollar commisioned... went through allot of stages. More than i would have liked. Maybe the next one is easier.

Does anyone remember my danger bots? lol I loved designed those and i forgot what most of them looked liked. :( anyone have a favorite bot of mine?

[Carravaggio]

yeah the spinning blade bot. i give it kamakazi in FF so when you defeat it it explodes, and spiny so when you enter h2h combat u have a chance of being cut.

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design that bot was one of my favorite...no phsyquie and easy animation

i might do more bot designs for fun.

want to see the whole process from thumbs to finished to almost finished?

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48496139/ <---thumbs added

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remember the dr.strange?

meet the ww
i guess in the theme of magic

[Nymph]

ok.........I have alot to say!  :thumbup:

The Aeronaut is the perfect name for your first drawing!!!
He is like a futuristic villain in a world with The Jetson-like fashion lol!
The Tagbot seems to work in that era as well. I miss your Airship crew, but they
seem like they belong in the same time  as The Aeronaut and his maurading Tagbots of Belty Doom!

The girl's color scheme is weird. The guy must have been on LSD when he designed her lol!
But you made it work....the gold fits in well with her colors....and I love how you made her eyes the same green as her pendant!  :P
Again she fits in with the futuristic-cyber theme....I think that is where you are headed next....so keep in that era because your pumping out phenomenal stuff!!!!!!   

What ever happened to your drawings for Afghan Ant's space characters?  (I can't find it on your site and stuff....I liked those too.)

Is that like a fat alter-universe version of Doctor Octopus???? like............... THE CRAZY CRUSTACEAN!

Wonder Woman looks to be either flirting....or on the verge of tears....She is either staring intently at Superman with his shirt off......or watching Themyscira blow up as she flies away. Great work....the color scheme is awesome!
(I am a fan....but for once I would love to see a costume redisign of Wonder Woman....her clothing is way out there and she shows way too much......maybe if you have time........give her a modest outfit???)

[Burnout]

how about the alchemist for ur first drawin

[konbiz]

I think the Anarchist seems very fitting for your first drawing. Ink I love all your work, you have your own unique style and it is all imaculate. Keep it up.  :thumbup:

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Hey guys i have been working on a seq and i am still learning this whole story telling process.However this is what i got and it is still in its rough stages. I tend to fill out the page wrongly and i need ot know about flow and movement of the page. Does it flow well? Does it read well?  Are positions of the characters making the page off  balance. I am a little rusty and i could use all the help i could get

sCript by gail simone: This is page 2




I have included my thumbnails which are even rougher and well very fraggment. Do i need more panel variation or does this work. Can you figure out whats going on because if you cant its okay.




PAGE TWO:
PANEL ONE: The machine gun, laying on the lawn where it landed, in the overgrown weeds. It lies next to a chubby, unblinking baby doll missing an arm and a leg.
THUG (TAILLESS): ARRRRRRRRRRUUGHKKKK!
HUNTRESS CAP: It wasn't easy getting him to TALK.
HUNTRESS CAP: Not easy stuff at all.
PANEL TWO: A ten year old Caucasian kid, with sunken, troubled eyes, close up. This scene is all flashback, David, so whatever method you like to use to convey that is fine. He's in a nice school room, and he's talking with Helena, who is a teacher in her civilian identity, but we don't see her yet. Corey's wearing a Green Lantern shirt, blue jeans, and looks like the weight of the world is on his shoulder.
HUNTRESS CAP: Last semester, Corey was one of my best students.
COREY: C'n I GO now, Ms. Bertinelli?
HUNTRESS: Happy, smart, and FUNNY in a way beyond his
years.
PANEL THREE: Helena, looking down on him from her desk.
HELENA: Corey...
HELENA: I want you to know--I'm not exactly LIKE the other
teachers.
HELENA: If you tell me what's wrong, maybe I could HELP.
PANEL FOUR: Back to the ganghouse, inside, Huntress is holding the first thug by the shirt with both hands. He's missing a front tooth and is barely conscious. At the same time, she's moving slightly out of the way of another Caucasian gangbanger who has a samurai sword and has swung it at her.
SECOND THUG: This OUR place, FOO.
PANEL FIVE: She kicks him, almost not paying attention, smashing him face first (and sword flying) straight into the bigscreen tv.
HUNTRESS: Sit down and shut up.
HUNTRESS: I'll get to you in a MINUTE.
HUNTRESS CAP: Something in my tone must've, I don't know...
HUNTRESS CAP: ...opened Corey's floodgates. Because he
started talking.

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major concerns about flow...page 3

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better of an update?

[MJB]

I didn't get a chance to reply before you posted the updates. I really like how you flipped that one panel in the last update. It was awkward having the baddie come at her from the left side of the page and then have her kick to the right. The fix is great and I love how you zoomed in closer to the Huntress in the flipped panel. Nice work.

-MJB

[Revenant]

Yay, we're going to get to see a Huntress drawn by Ink!!!  :thumbup:

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heh thanks guys... I've got a good couple of crits so i might have to redo some panels. Sigh :) but hopefully it's worth it