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Title: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: AfghanAnt on October 31, 2008, 07:28:19 PM
Here's a preview of a team Unkoman and I put together.

[spoiler](http://i33.tinypic.com/sf9mhy.jpg)[/spoiler]

Who they are and what they are to become will be revealed in coming days.
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: vamp on October 31, 2008, 07:36:25 PM
They look pretty cool. I remember that you mentioned that it would be based on urban legends or something, but I really can't tell which ones. But I guess all that info will be revealed later. I like how "vamp"(or whatever his name is now) and the bat-boy have similar designs. All together, they look awesome.
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: The Hitman on October 31, 2008, 09:10:52 PM
NICE! I really like the Mothman. Great job, guys!
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: Carravaggio on October 31, 2008, 10:07:20 PM
Phenomenal stuff guys! I've long maintained that collaborations help skinners push their bounds and provide inspiration, and here is proof! These are some of the coolest originals I've seen. I'm guessing next to the bat boy is a bat-man type mentor/hero for batboy to sidekick with. I'm also really interested in the story behind the metal suited glowing chap.
I look forward to finding out more :)
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: Gremlin on November 01, 2008, 12:49:19 AM
These look amazing. I'd love to see their villains!
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: Lunarman on November 01, 2008, 12:51:06 AM
Hmm, and things just got stranger....
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: Volsung on November 01, 2008, 02:49:23 AM
Great! That's the spirit!!!
So much personnality! They need their mod!
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: The Enigma on November 01, 2008, 03:49:38 AM
Is this some weird alternate version of The Authority? It seems to have fairly obvious Midnighter and Apollo analogues, the winged mothy guy could be Swift because, well, wings. The scantily clad furry woman is a lot like the scantily clad metallic Engineer with some Doctor-style red glasses things (ok, so it's warpaint, but still...). The batboy, I don't know, he's, er, he's crouching. Sometimes Hawksmoor crouches? Ok, so I'm stretching that one a bit. I guess I saw the Apollo-a-like and went from there. Amazing what the mind can do if you poke it in the right direction. Oh, and the skins are great, but, you know, I figured another answer saying basically that would be kinda dull as I'm sure you know they're great.
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: miguelyanke on November 01, 2008, 05:40:23 AM
O.o MORE!!! i want to know more!
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: Dr.Volt on November 01, 2008, 05:57:13 AM
Great to see this kind of new creative collaborations happening.  They look intriguing.  I can't wait to hear more!
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: yell0w_lantern on November 01, 2008, 06:16:43 AM
Could it be?
[spoiler]Afghan Ant + Unkoman = Keith Giffen + J.M. DeMatteis[/spoiler]
<crosses fingers>
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: djfredski on November 01, 2008, 09:35:44 AM
Who! :huh:
Title: Re: The World Just Got Weirder...
Post by: JKCarrier on November 01, 2008, 11:12:01 AM
Neat! Some really clever designs, and beautiful crisp execution. The only one I would criticize even a little is the brown butterfly guy -- he looks kind of bland next to the others. Maybe a few small accents in a different color would help him "pop" more?
Title: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 03, 2008, 04:20:33 PM
(http://i37.tinypic.com/zl7xvs.jpg)

From the depths of space comes the Ancient Astronaut, Ashtar Sheron. Gifted with the ability to manipulate matter, Ashtar has walked upon the Earth for a millennium healing and protecting human under various religious guises. Now that the time of the Nemesis Sun grows near, he is once again awakened to protect those he has grown to love.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Blkcasanova247 on November 03, 2008, 04:27:33 PM
:blink: :blink: :blink: Very cool!
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Xenolith on November 03, 2008, 04:48:29 PM
I agree.  Very, very nice.  I like the back story. 
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: herodad1 on November 03, 2008, 04:58:47 PM
i remember an episode of the x-files where the jersey devil was a wild cave woman.is that who she's suppose to be?
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Zippo on November 03, 2008, 06:24:52 PM
Hmmm... Is the cloaked one Spring-Heeled Jack? (The urban legend, not the FR member :P)
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Podmark on November 03, 2008, 08:15:16 PM
The details and skoping of the Astronaut are phenomenal. Excellent work AA.

Really want a better look at that black caped guy, he seems cool.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: BentonGrey on November 03, 2008, 09:45:53 PM
Quote from: Podmark on November 03, 2008, 08:15:16 PM
Really want a better look at that black caped guy, he seems cool.

Ditto.

Your skin of the Astronaut is, of course, excellent AA.  I'm not really qualified to give you any feedback on the actual skilled part of the creation process anyway, but I am not really crazy about his design.  The lack of pants is, I think, what throws me off.  The space suit is really cool, but his bare legs seem a bit...misplaced.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Podmark on November 03, 2008, 09:55:14 PM
Quote from: BentonGrey on November 03, 2008, 09:45:53 PM
The lack of pants is, I think, what throws me off.  The space suit is really cool, but his bare legs seem a bit...misplaced.

I actually like that element. Its unique and makes it appear that this character is fairly powerful in some respect.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: UnkoMan on November 03, 2008, 10:39:43 PM
I know we haven't really been commenting here to keep more of an air of mystery about the characters but I will say me and AA discussed it and we both liked the legless thing better. Once you learn more about his character and see some other things, I think you will find it makes a lot more sense for him.

On another note, I am glad you folks are liking these guys. We've got a lot of ideas for them.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Lunarman on November 03, 2008, 11:01:54 PM
Now that is nifty. And his suit is very clever, somehow ancient but also techy at the same time.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: cmdrkoenig67 on November 03, 2008, 11:32:11 PM
I am loving those new characters, AA...Awesome work.

Dana
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: murs47 on November 03, 2008, 11:56:32 PM
That is just amazing!
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Gremlin on November 04, 2008, 01:07:48 AM
That's phenomenal. Holy peas.
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: miguelyanke on November 04, 2008, 05:24:19 AM
Uhmm AA why don't you alpha the body and use other without that things in the hands?
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: Blkcasanova247 on November 04, 2008, 08:39:25 AM
I was thinkin' about that too...are the "sleeves" intentional? If not you might want to switch out the bodies. ;)
Title: Re: Day 1: The Ancient Astronaut
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 04, 2008, 08:44:19 AM
Sleeves are not intentional. One of these days I'm going to fixed that. I've just been too lazy honestly.

Also I'd like to thank Johnny Patches. He did the AA skope for me. All I did was move some things around and add additional extras.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 05, 2008, 08:04:57 AM
(http://i38.tinypic.com/28sa7ux.jpg)

Preying on ancient fears, The Night Stalker lurks in the deepest of shadows. An experimental medical accident cursed Dr. Ron Dillon to a
world of blackness, horror, and undying hunger. Yet, denying his newfound dark desires he has chosen to use his unholy powers to
protect the innocent, if not for for the sake of his son and his own guilt than any love of humanity.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Volsung on November 05, 2008, 08:33:43 AM
 :thumbup: The mooood! . The people want a moood!
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: laughing paradox on November 05, 2008, 08:53:45 AM
I'm curious, are all these characters based on urban legends or just original?

I like the design of this second character the most.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: UnkoMan on November 05, 2008, 09:19:55 AM
I wouldn't say urban legend. They are based more on myth and folklore. Basically if you're one of those people who knows a thing or two about the occult then you should be able to spot the references.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Podmark on November 05, 2008, 09:42:38 AM
The Nite Skalker skin skates the line of generic in some spots but I really like how it turned out. It really pulls off the darkness and horror elements.

I'm not huge on the big ear things, seem a little too big, but it probably works for what you're going for.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Jakew on November 05, 2008, 03:42:16 PM
What's the significance of the "V" on the belt buckle?

Love the cape and mask.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 05, 2008, 03:45:10 PM
Quote from: Jakew on November 05, 2008, 03:42:16 PM
What's the significance of the "V" on the belt buckle.

It is funny you bring that up but his name was original going to be Vampire but we recently changed.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: herodad1 on November 05, 2008, 05:18:50 PM
what about a swirling mist/energy being called poltergeist?
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Jakew on November 05, 2008, 07:46:05 PM
Coming from someone who doesn't skin ... I'd think about changing the V on the belt buckle. I love the V motif on the chest and head piece, but I think if you're going to have letters on the hero's buckle, it has to reflect the name or group.

Are those little blood vials on his belt? Great touch.

I'd like to see a humanoid sewer dwelling alligator-style character.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Lunarman on November 05, 2008, 10:59:10 PM
I like him very much, even though your colour scheme is close he still looks interesting and vibrant.
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 06, 2008, 07:21:28 AM
We actually have all the characters and the script planned out so no additional characters are going to be added or they would have to be worked into the story. Sorry, guys.  :cool:
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Previsionary on November 06, 2008, 07:24:59 AM
story? What. Are. You. Talking. About?  :o
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 06, 2008, 07:53:19 AM
Quote from: Previsionary on November 06, 2008, 07:24:59 AM
story? What. Are. You. Talking. About?  :o

There might be a mod if we can find someone to help code it...pretty please anyone...
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: Blkcasanova247 on November 06, 2008, 08:57:32 AM
Night Stalker is pretty sweet! Good work guys. :D
Title: Re: Day 2: The Night Stalker
Post by: catwhowalksbyhimself on November 06, 2008, 09:20:18 AM
QuoteI wouldn't say urban legend. They are based more on myth and folklore. Basically if you're one of those people who knows a thing or two about the occult then you should be able to spot the references.

Well, I do, or at least the names let me know what these are based on.  A pretty cool idea.

For the reference of those less familiar:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ancient_astronaut

Night Stalkers are harder to find information about, mostly because of tv shows and movies of the same name, but here's an interesting form thread on the subject.

http://www.dreamviews.com/community/showthread.php?t=37621
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 09, 2008, 04:40:27 PM
(http://i37.tinypic.com/2zghoow.jpg)

Breaking her race's code to remain secret; Lady Sasquatch comes from the wilderness of the Pacific Northwest to protect an increasingly unstable modern world.  With her brute strength and endurance, she has vowed to protect and guide those who exploit the Earth.
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: Blkcasanova247 on November 09, 2008, 08:47:21 PM
Wow...a bare butt in FR? :P
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: Lunarman on November 09, 2008, 10:53:39 PM
Very nice work on skinning the fur. However the skoping looks a bit 'forced' on the chest hair. But I understand this is a limitation of the process.

Nice
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: BentonGrey on November 10, 2008, 01:38:09 PM
She was my least favorite of the designs you previewed, but the skin is, of course, excellent.  I really like the work on her face, and that red line right there is a really wonderful accent.  I LOVE the close up shot there where you can tell it is like warpaint.  The hairy wildwoman thing just doesn't work for me too well, but we'll just say that is because my imagination is limited. :D

I LOVE the Nitestalker skin, though, without qualification.  I especially like those little vials of "blood" at his belt.  He reminds me of the Confessor from Astro City, and that is a very good thing. (although, seeing as I'm working with that book, that is hardly surprising as it is always on my mind).
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: Jakew on November 10, 2008, 08:06:19 PM
I'm not really digging the torso for Lady Sasquatch ... I don't think the nude back half works.
Title: Re: Day 3: Lady Sasquatch
Post by: Podmark on November 10, 2008, 08:47:53 PM
Yeah its a bit of a blah design - could be mesh restrictions playing her though. Skinning wise it's good. I like the red band across the face. I do like the idea though, I get kind of a Wonder Woman vibe from it.
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: AfghanAnt on November 14, 2008, 12:26:54 PM
(http://i38.tinypic.com/oszfjo.jpg)

Roaming the West Virginia countryside is the mysterious creature of legend known only as the Mothman. Silent seer, it has been forced to bare witness to disaster and human hardship, having no choice but to stand idly by while its terrible predictions occur. This newest vision, however, simply cannot come to pass.
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: Blkcasanova247 on November 14, 2008, 07:31:37 PM
Diggin it! :thumbup:
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: catwhowalksbyhimself on November 15, 2008, 04:41:56 PM
And for more information on the legends behind it: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mothman

I figured that was unnecessary for the Sasquatch.

Using legends and stories like this for a supergroup is brilliant, by the way.
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: Champion 2 of 11 on December 11, 2008, 01:57:25 PM
Vampire is a better name I'm diggin' this too!
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: UnkoMan on December 12, 2008, 07:28:41 AM
Oh neat. Lookit how we haven't updated in forever.

Well get used to it. We'll probably do a massive update later.
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: Gremlin on December 14, 2008, 12:46:08 AM
I like the massive update bit. Not the later bit, though.
Title: Re: Day 4: Mothman
Post by: AfghanAnt on December 16, 2008, 07:48:56 AM
Unko's done some amazing work and I really need to finish up a few more.