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Started by Glitch Girl, January 05, 2009, 04:12:18 PM

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The Phantom Eyebrow

So many haikus,
I count thirty six so far
(Not including this...)

MJB

Emjaybee has kept,
His nose clean from this so far.
Trends will continue.

-MJB

Gremlin

Haikus are real nice.
But they don't always make sense.
Refridgerator.

Glitch Girl

I am here at work.
It's too quiet in this thread.
Silence is broken.
-Glitch Girl

"Cynicism is not maturity, do not mistake the one for the other. If you truly cannot accept a story where someone does the right thing because it's the right thing to do, that says far more about who you are than these characters." - Greg Rucka

The Phantom Eyebrow

I would write one now
A post in the haiku style
I'll do it later

Inadvertantly
It seems I wrote one just now
How fortuituous

Spam

Cheese, cheese, cheese, cheese.

Cheese mccheese cheeseness cheesey?

Cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese.

FOR I

AM

SPAM!
Mmmmmmm... Donuts...

The Phantom Eyebrow

Quote from: Spam on March 27, 2009, 08:14:39 PM
Cheese, cheese, cheese, cheese.

Cheese mccheese cheeseness cheesey?

Cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese.

FOR I

AM

SPAM!

:angry: That's NOT how its done!
Haikus have structured formats
There are rules here man!

Glitch Girl

#37
Not so fast Eyebrow,
While lines are off here and there
it does work.  Mostly.

I counted it up,
'cause I thought it was wrong too.
Can't flog Spam this time.
-Glitch Girl

"Cynicism is not maturity, do not mistake the one for the other. If you truly cannot accept a story where someone does the right thing because it's the right thing to do, that says far more about who you are than these characters." - Greg Rucka

Alaric

#38
Quote from: Glitch Girl on March 30, 2009, 03:06:38 PM
Not so fast Eyebrow,
While lines are off here and there
it does work.  Mostly.

I counted it up,
'cause I thought it was wrong too.
Can't flog Spam this time.

Are you right this time?
Could Spam have got it right now?
Let's find out, shall we?

Quote from: Spam on March 27, 2009, 08:14:39 PM
Cheese, cheese, cheese, cheese. Cheese
Mccheese cheeseness cheesey?
Cheese. FOR I AM SPAM!
Fear the "A"!!!

The Phantom Eyebrow

NO!  You can't just write seventeen syllables and call it a haiku!

Glitch Girl

Oh darn you Eyebrow
making me count all those words.
Very sneaky there.
-Glitch Girl

"Cynicism is not maturity, do not mistake the one for the other. If you truly cannot accept a story where someone does the right thing because it's the right thing to do, that says far more about who you are than these characters." - Greg Rucka

Gremlin

OH SNAP! That was neat.
And rather impressive, too.
I couldn't do that.

Torch

if a haiku falls
in forest does anyone
care five seven five?

JeyNyce

I am the TECH here
I'm also a MOD here too
I am so confuse
I don't call for tech support, I AM TECH SUPPORT!
It's the internet, don't take it personal!

Gremlin

You necroposters.
What is your problem? Really!
(This thread is cool, though.)

The Phantom Eyebrow

Quote from: Gremlin on May 26, 2009, 02:02:29 AM
(This thread is cool, though.)
That it most certainly is
One cool thread, is this!

Glitch Girl

Over a year gone
by and I feel nostalgic...

Aieee! Zombie thread! :P
-Glitch Girl

"Cynicism is not maturity, do not mistake the one for the other. If you truly cannot accept a story where someone does the right thing because it's the right thing to do, that says far more about who you are than these characters." - Greg Rucka

The Phantom Eyebrow

I can't believe it
This haiku thread is dormant
I mean, what gives, eh?

Tawodi Osdi

Haiku poetry
Is big to the Japanese.
But it does not rhyme.